Coerced Delusion

  • This is my new and very first blog. The site will be filled with clothing designed by myself, along with a portfolio or photography and graphic design work. There will also be posts that go with the idea behind the clothing company such as good music and art, REAL news and current events. Let me know what you think and how i can make this site more effective. It’s not really meant to speak to everybody, but to open peoples minds to real life rather than the “coerced delusion” we have all been taught to live.

    https://www.CoercedDelusion.com

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    (@dmarsh508)

    Feedback please? ??

    bretrichter

    (@bretrichter)

    WELL….

    1) get rid of the first page, the “click to enter”. This page serves no use. Google nor the viewer likes this.

    2) your homepage

    Coerced Delusion will be entering your brain through your eyes wherever you go, from this point on.

    Two new stickers are available in the store. Although most of them will be given and sold to people i know, if you would like to order

    After reading this, at first im very very confused, then you are trying to sell me something. As a viewer, you have 1 second to keep me, or lose me…and your site had already cost me 5 second. Figure out what you are trying to provide the viewer, and do so quickly.

    This site has lots of work. But dont give up, put in the hard work and get there!

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