Design Feedback – Before Implementation

  • Hey I’ve recently been building my own WordPress theme and I think I am nearly there. But I would like some constructive criticism in ways you feel that I can improve it.

    Site Design Here

    As the moment I’m not really happy with the navigation, but not sure what to do with it. So any ideas would be welcomed. Also anything else you think I could change to help improve it will also be welcomed.

    Thanks in advance

    Adam
    https://www.adamhuxtable.com

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    Why the huge honking watermark all over the jpeg? And I don’t understand the presence of the image since you provided the live site link. Aren’t they the same design? What am I supposed to critique?

    The only thing that I found jarring and out of place were:

    (1) “Tips, Reviews…” tagline. I don’t like that font; it’s too hard to read. Keep a nice sans-serif font for that; sometimes you can have too many fonts going on.

    (2) On the comp (image), you had images next to Home, Portfolio, About Me, Contact Me … but I see on the live link, they are gone. They are fine to have, but I think they should be kept on the same x-axis as the social icons. The way they are on the comp looks out of place, almost like a coding mistake, know what I mean? ??

    And I’d shorten About Me and Contact Me to just About and Contact. ??

    And you might want to fix that “parse error” in your stylesheet.
    https://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/validator?profile=css21&warning=0&uri=http%3A%2F%2Fadamhuxtable.com%2F

    Other than that, nice and clean.

    Thread Starter Adam Huxtable

    (@ahux)

    Hehe, When I posted the jpeg the site was not live.

    Yeah I can see your point about the font does look untidy, will change that when I get a spare couple of minutes.

    Yeah I did have them there but whilst implementing the site I decided the site looked cleaner without them, but I get what ya ment about them looking untidy.

    Just edited the page name.

    Will now get on to fixing that parse error.

    Thank you so much for your feedback, its much appreciated! ??

    Adam

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