Hi @nkwebdesign
I think I want to focus on the check out page
If I understand you correctly, you want to add a feedback area/section on your Checkout page, is that correct?
If yes, you can customize the checkout fields using actions and filters and this codex documentation will walk you through:
https://woocommerce.com/document/tutorial-customising-checkout-fields-using-actions-and-filters/#adding-a-custom-special-field
Here’s the sample output:

Image Link: https://woocommerce.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/WooCommerce-Codex-Checkout-Field-Hook.png
also tax and free shipping seem to be wrong.
people not from local can click “local pick up” I haven’t figure out how to fix that.
I believe that you already created another forum thread related to your inquiry here:
https://www.ads-software.com/support/topic/local-pick-up-not-showing/