my first ever site! please review

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  • Debbie van Cleef

    (@debbieschrijft)

    It looks lovely! Simple and to the point. I like the style. Just one spelling error in the ‘about us’ section: “and in 1995. Joe, my partner”
    I don’t think the period belongs there?

    Thread Starter gazrobbo

    (@gazrobbo)

    Well spotted, I’ll change that.
    Many thanks.

    Simon Hedin

    (@designstoler)

    Great resuts for first webste!

    Since I am supposed to be critical, I feel you are missing some images on the “About us” page.

    Maybe an image of Jo with the dogs, or an image of the store, to make it more local and personal?

    sanjeev15906

    (@sanjeev15906)

    Great! for first attempt.

    Image slider is nice you need a good image gallery for your dogs pic.
    then your site become a complete productive website.

    Regards
    Sanjeev Kumar Raghuwanshi

    Thread Starter gazrobbo

    (@gazrobbo)

    Thanks for the suggestions. Ill make those my next task.

    Thanks

    Gary

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