New multilingual webcomic

The overall appearance is rather messy.

I’ll leave it up to someone who can take the time to sort through the home page and give you a better critique.

Thanks… could you plese detail so that I can sort things out?

OK, I took another look.

First, your header and sidebar are too light and get confused with the background (what is that, hair?). Gray text on a black background with the ‘stuff’ on the left makes it nearly unreadable.

Next, do you have an error in a plugin on the bottom left?

And what is that narrow box to the right of the error message at the bottom? The word wrap with only 3 or 4 letters makes it difficult to read.

Is this site supposed to have comics? (like the URL suggests?). If it is, I don’t get the image of the bathroom, etc.??

Thanks… and yes it is hair.

– For the header, I realized that some computers don’t display the intended font.
– Sidebar… I’ll work on it. I have conflicting intention.
– Bottom left? I don’t understand where’s the issue.

The rest is part of this particular comic, so you can try a previous one if you don’t like this one. My work is quite experimental (both graphically and in the narrative), and I change style quite often, this one is the only one made that way.

Anyway, thanks again.