IMHO, you did very well, escpecially for being new to the code and system. It is a dark theme, which I tend to like, but it lacks any real design elements. My current theme is pretty dark, industrial and somewhat image heavy, but I guess it’s all relative.
I do have a question, the top left menu (simplicity, silence, solitude) will those be content boxes, or just a demo in window control?
Ideas: use more color for focal aspects; make people look where you want, and add some graphics.
PS: I also like the picture you have of the crow, nice snap; me like birdies ??