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possible hack or a plugin you added recently?did you make any changes before this happened? I do not have enough history with this sort of stuff. I would lookinto other people with the same problem.

Also, I tryed look at your site, and it took about 5 min to load. this is a HUGE problem. I hope that it was just server maintenance, any one else having this problem?

cactus, thank you for your comment,
But please dont hijack my post ??

Also, I made some changes to the format, I would love some more feed back.

whiteatom.
Thanks, I did some tweaking with my SEO, hope it fixes it.
Yes i am using google analytics, and its working great!

harmck,
failblog.org is not mine. funnyfailblog.com is,
…not sure on the point you are trying to address.

BibleStudies,

Thank you very much. your post was alot of help. I used Google Insight to do my keyword research, what are you using?

1) how does your comment help me at all?
2) why would you spend time posting if you arnt going to help.
3) what is gms

Love it!
the only thing i might suggest:

1) the background image is awsome, but might slow down page time.
2) be sure to SEO your site so google searches will get users to your site.
3) a handy tool i use to critige my page,
Web Site Grader (not my site, but a good tool)
https://websitegrader.com

your website scores a 42/100
read through and find ways to improve it.

Keep up the good work.

Speed seems good.
It is a very simple site, not a lot to load.

having a very simple site is a good thing, to a point. your site is almost at that point, but its simple enough that readers might not want to stay. Capture my attention. add some images.

ok, here are some ways to improve:

1) some of your pages (exmaple: home, photo gallery) looks like completely different websites. Make all your pages obey by the same design standards.

2) your home page is too blank. this is where most of your content should be. As a user, i see a page with 1 pic. what is keeping me at your site? add content, best photos to your main page to make me want to check out the rest of the site.

I like. very simple. I suggest:

1) User review/comments are going to make or break your site. there are some great plugins for user rating, and post rating. This will alow the reader to see how other readers reviewed this product.

2) add a categories, for a fast and simple way to find what the reader is looking for.

cool, I like.
Things to improve your site.

1) SEO your site, this will get you more traffic, more readers.
2)users usually will look at a site for 1 seconds, and leave or read. looking at your site for 1 second, im not real sure what its about. Figure out a way to capture the viewers attention to make them stay.

Hope this helps.

you need IMAGES!

agree with gixmoses.

It looks like a blank blog…yes yes i know, it is a blog. the goal is to make it not look like a blog. but a professional website.

best of luck

I used a free theme, but also did alot of modifying to my desire.

Also used a plug in for side login. not sure what its called, just search for side login.

Thank you for your input. any one else? tell me how to make it BETTER!

WELL….

1) get rid of the first page, the “click to enter”. This page serves no use. Google nor the viewer likes this.

2) your homepage

Coerced Delusion will be entering your brain through your eyes wherever you go, from this point on.

Two new stickers are available in the store. Although most of them will be given and sold to people i know, if you would like to order

After reading this, at first im very very confused, then you are trying to sell me something. As a viewer, you have 1 second to keep me, or lose me…and your site had already cost me 5 second. Figure out what you are trying to provide the viewer, and do so quickly.

This site has lots of work. But dont give up, put in the hard work and get there!

I mean no disrespect, This is my own view of your site.

Viewers are STUPID! What i mean is that you have 1 second to sell your site to the user. As a user, as the page loads, they quickly scroll down to see what your site is about with out reading. They then decide if its worth the time to read or to leave. Think about it, how do you determine if a site is Spam or legit?

As a Viewer, I scroll down seeing outfits for sale, then coupons, then what looks like a tutorial. Your Right, I didnt read a single thing on your site, But would a viewer? HELL NO, they would load the page, try to figure out if this site is for them or not, then read or leave.

You need to keep your topic focused. If your site is about selling outfits, THEN SELL THEM OUTFITS, if your site is about getting coupons, THE GIVE THEM COUPONS. website topics need to be very very narrow in content. its very difficult to get lots of traffic when you are trying to present a very broad amount of information to the viewer.

If you would like more help or comments, please feel to email me.
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I would be happy to help you out because i think you have a great idea going.

Best of luck!